Rough cut

The rough cut which had been edited over all the takes which had been previously done. There were several different takes this is a small section of the thriller which had been compressed into about half a minute. This is a brief introduction to our piece which shows Sara walking into the park who is then shortly followed by her partner Marcus.

When watching this back there were some minors errors which we had noticed, by fixing small errors like this it will allow us to make our final piece to have a better finish the first error which we had noticed was at about 0:14. The error which we had noticed was that when Sara first started walking she had gone quite far and when we show her then walking towards the camera she is further back makes it look as an unprofessional finish, it also looked slightly grainy. This didn't fit the effect pf continuity.

The next error/improvement which was noticed by the focus group was that we should keep Marcus's identity a secret.this was noticed at 0:25. At this point we saw the protagonist Marcus watch is wife Sara walk into the woods. The focus group said that the impact of suspense isn't the same as if to if his identity was kept a secret.